Excitement was bubbling up inside me standing at the start line.
" ready, set, go! Foot steps stomping on the ground as I raced to the front, loud cheers screaming for me.
I was a sloth on my third lap. As tiring as it seemed I kept running.
Slowing down suddenly I crossed the finish line puffing like a bull on a hot day .
I was glad that cross country was finished .
All that training was worth it.
Putting all the effort and hard work achieves great things
I love your story Paige
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Great descriptive language Paige. Well done
ReplyDeleteNice adjectives. Brianna
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