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Sunday 8 June 2014

Cross Country by Paige

Excitement was bubbling up inside me standing at the start line.  
" ready, set, go! Foot steps stomping on the ground  as I raced to the front, loud cheers screaming for me.

I was a sloth on my third lap. As tiring as it seemed I kept running. 
Slowing down suddenly I crossed the finish line puffing like a bull on a hot day .
I was glad that cross country was finished .

All that training was worth it.
Putting all the effort and hard work achieves great things

by Paige

3 comments:

  1. I love your story Paige
    From Georgia

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  2. Micaela Devereux1 August 2014 at 19:33

    Great descriptive language Paige. Well done

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  3. Nice adjectives. Brianna

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