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Wednesday 18 March 2015

Sam's Storybird Writing

15 comments:

  1. What a great story.I really loved it.

    .by Hayden

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  2. Great Job Sam!!!!
    I like Spiky, he is cute

    by Hajoo

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  3. I really enjoyed reading your Storybird Sam. You used some interesting words such as stumbling and crawling. Fantastic effort.

    From Mrs Anderson-McGhie

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  4. I want Spiky as our pet, Sam! Can you write some more stories about him please?
    By Sam's mum

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  5. Well done Sam.I really enjoyed reading about Spikey,look forward to reading more about him.
    Sam's nan from Wales.

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  6. Well done Sam.I really enjoyed reading about Spiky.Look forward to reading more about him.
    Sam's nanny from Wales

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  7. Well Done Sam. I really enjoyed reading your story. You did very well.

    Kate. Sams Cousin

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  8. Great job you used description and really good punctuation. And grammar

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  9. A lovely story! It was great fun to read

    Great Uncle David from Pangbourne England

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  10. I liked the lovable little character Sam. A great story. You could make up lots of things he can do! Well done.

    Great Aunt Mary Reading England

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  11. Very Good.
    Second Cousin Tim, Notts UK

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  12. The story was extraordinary.

    By Hayden

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  13. spiky is so cute!. Emily

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  14. What a great story. Even I like it.

    By Hayden's baby sister, Nyvana.

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